Post by 1manchiliband on Dec 24, 2009 4:31:34 GMT -5
Ok Mike..I've asked alot of you but now I'm thinking we need an original section, now I know people are shy about this, and I would like to see people's originals. I know you got some so let's kick this shit off as a family. Yes I'm thinking as you guys as a family. So yes, post your original's and we shall all be gental with our criticism, because writing a song and covering them are a completely different thing, so I will post one first, it's the first song I've ever written, it's about a girl I loved and now she's getting married to someone I used to hate. I just want to let everyone know that I consider most of you the most incredible musicians I've encountered and value your opinions more than my family who have a conflict of interest, so while I want you to be gental, in that same respect please be honest in what you think, Thanks to all love and peace and all that jive. It's kind of a personal song so sorry if it's to mushy for anyone, but it's about someone I cared about for years and she pushed me into making my own music instead of just coping others.
Confidence and self criticism can be your greatest enemy, so just start creating and love what you make.
Lyrics to Fall By Al Evers aka (1manchiliband)
Look into you eyes, the greenest eye's of all
You look right through my lie's
I fall-all-all
runnin to my car-ar
start to trip and stall-all
I'm lookin in you direction
fall-all-all
Then I fall----Than I fall-all-all
fell-----all over you again
Time away I spend-end
you know I'm still your frie-end
my love I will defend
cause I'm fall-all-en
all over you------
I stay away from me
fell-ell all over you again
(Instrumental)
Been a while since then
though our loves grown thin
I cannot pretend
that I'm over you
Again-----------
That I'm over you
I--- will----- always
Love You
Confidence and self criticism can be your greatest enemy, so just start creating and love what you make.
Lyrics to Fall By Al Evers aka (1manchiliband)
Look into you eyes, the greenest eye's of all
You look right through my lie's
I fall-all-all
runnin to my car-ar
start to trip and stall-all
I'm lookin in you direction
fall-all-all
Then I fall----Than I fall-all-all
fell-----all over you again
Time away I spend-end
you know I'm still your frie-end
my love I will defend
cause I'm fall-all-en
all over you------
I stay away from me
fell-ell all over you again
(Instrumental)
Been a while since then
though our loves grown thin
I cannot pretend
that I'm over you
Again-----------
That I'm over you
I--- will----- always
Love You